Today was Elizabeth's eighteenth birthday. Her stepfather was stringing balloons across the front porch for her party that afternoon when he shouted something that made Elizabeth turn. She ran to the door and her eyes followed his to black shiny river that was coming down the street toward their yard. She could smell something like old rubber tires and it burned the back of her throat. While she watched the black river cover her sidewalk she heard her father calling 911 and trying to describe the scene of rushing oil. By mid-afternoon they were packing their suitcases as were all of their neighbors, calling relatives and friends to cancel the party and moving to a Holiday Inn near the Mayflower Quik Mart. Dinner was sandwiches and soda from the Quick Mart and dessert was her birthday cake which they had packed for the trip. It was shared by relatives and friends that had come to commiserate. Elizabeth asked when they would be heading back home and her father shrugged his shoulders in dismay.
Walking slowly and carefully with his cane, Babur padlocks the front door and then the metal gate and slowly drops the keys along with the key to the paddock for his three cows into a neighbor's hand. He is leaving his mountain home at this early hour before the sunrise to escape frightening airstrikes from U.S. drones which they called benghai or "buzzing flies" targeting militants near his home in the remote mountains of Afghanistan. Babur turned to the American journalist who was asking him questions and said that you cannot see them but the buzzing sound goes on and on and then the bombing sounds begin. When the journalist asked when he would return home again, he sighed and shook his head.
Strong winds were whipping hair all around Alicia's head as she threw another garbage bag of clothes into the back of the pick-up truck. She held a cell phone tight to one ear trying to keep her voice as calm as possible while she described to her husband the awfulness of the fire that had eaten the McDonald's house at the end of the street. There were sirens screaming in the background competing with the noise of the helicopter overhead and men in fire gear yelling at her and her neighbors to get going. Fire engines blocked half of the end of the street. Smoke filled the air making her cough at the end of each sentence. She turned and her son held up his baseball mitt and ball for her. She had screamed at him twice to get into the cab of the truck, and this time she swooped him into one hand as she struggled with her phone in the other. She asked her husband how long it would take to recover their losses if the fire got as far as their house, but there was no answer because her phone went dead.
(All of these are fictionalized accounts of actual news I read this week.)
Sorry, but this is very hard to read on blue background. Is it my device?
ReplyDeleteBill, if you are using an Android, my phone type, I have the same problem. A PC or Mac should render the background layered.
ReplyDeleteI think I fixed it for mobile...I will try to check from my phone.
ReplyDeleteWhat terrific writing... makes me realize how lucky I am.
ReplyDeleteWhat amazing stories, I wish the news was presented like this so everyone would realize there are real people involved. What a beautiful room you've pictured.
ReplyDeleteWe've live out evacuations here, from hurricanes. You never know what you will get to go home to, if you get to go home. You've caught that well.
ReplyDeleteyou have put a human face on the news.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting, and a good idea to do that.
ReplyDeleteVery creative. A most enjoyable read. You are a very good writer.
ReplyDeleteTouching genius!
ReplyDeleteLove this, Tabor...... beautifully done!
ReplyDeleteThank you for putting us into their shoes. It does happen so often, yet I go about my day, taking everything for granted. I'm stopping to give thanks and say a prayer for all of those who are faced with leaving their homes.
ReplyDeleteI'm not able reading too much, so I will talk about the picture, which is lovely.
ReplyDeleteYou really brought these experiences to the human level. Good job
ReplyDeleteThere but for the grace of God go you and I . . . . . .
ReplyDelete(and I am not religious)
Thank you for the link Tabor, I’ve downloaded the book on to my ipad.
I haven't been keeping up with the news over the last few weeks, though I recognize some of what you've written, which really tugs on my heart. You write with the quality of a succesful novelist.
ReplyDeleteSadly, there is more to add to this post. The Boston tragedy is hard to comprehend; it can't be.