Thursday, August 03, 2006

Black Talk

“Caw." "Ca rue ca rue.”
Two feathered friends’ rhythmic cool
Summer jazz session

8 comments:

  1. Nice jive. They must be from New Orleans....

    ReplyDelete
  2. Look at your cool haiku! :)

    ReplyDelete
  3. This, I assume, is a dialog between a crow and a raven?

    ReplyDelete
  4. You are really rolling now! Well done!

    ReplyDelete
  5. Maya, it was two crows and they really had a rhythm going. One would caw and the other would ca rue while sitting on the light over the parking lot. I am such a baby with this stuff and I thank you all for your encouragement. I feel as if I have successfully lifted the three pound weights!

    ReplyDelete
  6. Nice!
    My aunt is the editor of Geppo, a small haiku magazine (no online version, unfortunately.)
    I've tried my hand, but it is harder than it looks to get the right "feel"...
    Do more. :)

    ReplyDelete
  7. Anonymous9:31 AM

    I have read that crows have an amazing variation of crow language...even dialects, depending on from where they come. They also have big crow conventions, when they all seem to get together to jabber! I find them fascinating!

    ReplyDelete

Take your time...take a deep breath...then hit me with your best shot.